Random Instance Of Thought

Posted: 9th June 2008 by Ivan in Mbu poetry?!

I dropped a rhyme | Once upon a time,

Back in the day | Back in my prime,

I dropped a rhyme in a style lyrical,

The delivery with a precision kinda surgical,

But that was back then…

when,

No one gave a shit about mice and men,

When,

My mind wandered about on a solitary plane,

When,

I pandered about on the brink of falling insane,

Then,

And then I broke the wall,

That which stood between you and I,

I called you boo,

You called me sweetypie,

But…

Again,

That was then,

  1. BubuNo Gravatar says:

    I wonder what inspired you to write this.

  2. 31337No Gravatar says:

    is this is an unfinished post?

    did it escape from captivity?

    what was on the author’s mind when he was penning it?

    what am i thinking?

  3. Ni99a you have skillz…

    Ok, that’s just me appreciating skillz

  4. antipopNo Gravatar says:

    sad nicely written er poem.

  5. katsNo Gravatar says:

    another sad love song…? where do you get these things?
    But I gotta give it to you- you’ve got your kalamashaks going

  6. kakaireNo Gravatar says:

    Lyrical G gots nothing on ya.

  7. LesiNo Gravatar says:

    Question that begs to be asked … what has happened since then?

  8. IvanNo Gravatar says:

    @ Tandra; Why yes, so it is.

    @ Bubu; uh, weed?

    @31337; yes.

    @B2B; Thank you thank you thank you, you’re far too kind

    @Antipop; Er, thanks

    @Kats; From deep within

    @Kakaire; Lyrical who? ;o)

    @Lesi; A L O T :o)