Random Instance Of Thought

I dropped a rhyme | Once upon a time,

Back in the day | Back in my prime,

I dropped a rhyme in a style lyrical,

The delivery with a precision kinda surgical,

But that was back then…

when,

No one gave a shit about mice and men,

When,

My mind wandered about on a solitary plane,

When,

I pandered about on the brink of falling insane,

Then,

And then I broke the wall,

That which stood between you and I,

I called you boo,

You called me sweetypie,

But…

Again,

That was then,

  1. F I R S T I E

    • Bubu
    • June 9th, 2008 1:07pm

    I wonder what inspired you to write this.

  2. is this is an unfinished post?

    did it escape from captivity?

    what was on the author’s mind when he was penning it?

    what am i thinking?

  3. Ni99a you have skillz…

    Ok, that’s just me appreciating skillz

  4. sad nicely written er poem.

    • kats
    • June 10th, 2008 2:05pm

    another sad love song…? where do you get these things?
    But I gotta give it to you- you’ve got your kalamashaks going

    • kakaire
    • June 11th, 2008 3:39am

    Lyrical G gots nothing on ya.

    • Lesi
    • June 19th, 2008 12:16pm

    Question that begs to be asked … what has happened since then?

    • Ivan
    • June 19th, 2008 12:25pm

    @ Tandra; Why yes, so it is.

    @ Bubu; uh, weed?

    @31337; yes.

    @B2B; Thank you thank you thank you, you’re far too kind

    @Antipop; Er, thanks

    @Kats; From deep within

    @Kakaire; Lyrical who? ;o)

    @Lesi; A L O T :o)

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